Baseball Bat

I found this drawing of mine that I made in January and I decided to redraw it!It was this like really savage looking girl with a baseball bat but the clothing was so not fitting for the premise.She had a loose tie,extremly long hair and the shirt was too short to cover her stomach(Quick explanation why I think the design didn't really fit : You NEVER wear loose things around your neck during a fight,unless you want to get choked,you always tie your hair or make it as hard as possible to grab it and you wear as much padding as possible so the impact won't hurt you as much).Sure my redesign isn't perfect at all,but I think it's at least a bit better.
Welp,feel free to point any mistakes or share advice with me!Constructive criticism is always appreciated,so don't be shy!






^{(This has nothing to do with the drawing,but deviantart notified me that I might want to begin with comissions and I was like,just,no.My art is barely decent enough free,if I were to start charging money for it I could possibly get sued because of some type of fraud lol.)}